Saturday, June 21, 2008

e-spawn

electronic swimming forth
tween nets and relaying bend to bend,
rivulets' turbulence drives,
but course steadied in stream, on line.
fish-like to spawn, new home to find,
in data packets not too private.
fleet sent forth with out formation,
repletely random, few successes;
many numbers sail out,
few to be returned

2 comments:

how can you have a beautiful ending without making beautiful mistakes said...

this made me mostly uncomfortable. impregnation and sperm mobilization via electrical fields....remind me of the matrix(a strange shroom trip for me - so nothing personal) the correlation between humanistic & virtualistic was good tho :)

Bryan said...

I actually didn't even think about human reproduction while writing this...but it fits the spawning metaphor